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| since I can not write | 1 |
what I want to | 2 |
because I can not understand | 3 |
how you make me ache | 4 |
ill never tell | 5 |
if your smile hurts | 6 |
you will never see | 7 |
only two hours away | 8 |
how much farther | 9 |
it feels to me | 10 |
these eyes will never show | 11 |
hurt, pain or remorse | 12 |
the sound will never | 13 |
reach you there | 14 |
up on your high horse | 15 |
yet my ears are full | 16 |
with encyclopedias | 17 |
of your woes | 18 |
as my arms grow tired | 19 |
from carrying you | 20 |
so you would not ruin | 21 |
you're freshly painted toes | 22 |
while your eyes bleed | 23 |
he doesn’t care | 24 |
your walking from here | 25 |
Ill meet you there | 26 |
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writers block , my apologies |
12 Apr 04 |
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I like this a lot. I like lines 7-10. You need to fix the "your" in line 25 to "you're".
— Hquartz
Apostrophes? But besides that, I like the first two lines. I feel like that a lot!
— Rynne
I ran across this on the random function. Fresh perspective on and old story, becauseof the denial thing, which expresses the denial or a part of healing. Well done.
— NicMichaels
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