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Rogue Butler
larrylark

While she took the lift upstairs
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to a jewel encrusted toilet
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and flushed her day away,
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he altered mechanics
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in her automatic alarm.
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A reminder to take ten
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from twenty boxes sent monthly
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as arranged
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by an exclusive, unlisted
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pharmacist.
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Over years
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he replaced pieces of furnishing
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with those of similar burnish
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but not quite.
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While she slept,
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rooms redecorated,
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inch by inch,
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in subtly different shades.
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Grandfather’s grim portrait,
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he unequivocally rearranged.
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Clocks altered,
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breakfast sent as supper,
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high tea taken during dreams
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of lunch
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when he would whisper in her ear,
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“We must not seek to change routine
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for it is what we require -
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Suspended animation
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set among reassuring scenery-
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that is why I was hired.”
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6 May 11


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Beautifully miserable
 — thecramps

Hi sir Larry  - Odd - interesting - almost Dickensian - the sinister butle butling as his employer gathers cobwebs and dust... Mitch :-)
 — pdemitchell

thats me thecramps

Larry drop dead gorgeous Lark
 — larrylark

she could be Miss Haversham and he could be....well,,,,,a butler?

Larry you rang m'lord Lark
 — larrylark

My toilet is encrusted alright - but not with those sort of jewels - mitch :-)
 — pdemitchell

One mans jewels are another mans droppings
 — larrylark

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