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on the road

conquer the world
so you don't die out
can't be a lone on a trail
with no route
pour out your heart
watch it explode
millions of pieces
lost on the road

3 Jun 11

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a poem for poetry's sake
 — unknown

love it
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L1 & L3 coiuld use a remodel. the poem s a whoile is wonderful. well done.
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Honestly this poem could start on L5 and be spectacular.
'a lone on a trail with no route' makes little sense and not much is gained from L1-4
food for thought.
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 — psychofemale