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on the road
psychofemale

conquer the world
 1
so you don't die out
 2
can't be a lone on a trail
 3
with no route
 4
pour out your heart
 5
watch it explode
 6
millions of pieces
 7
lost on the road
 8

3 Jun 11


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a poem for poetry's sake
 — unknown

love it
 — unknown

L1 & L3 coiuld use a remodel. the poem s a whoile is wonderful. well done.
 — unknown

Honestly this poem could start on L5 and be spectacular.
'a lone on a trail with no route' makes little sense and not much is gained from L1-4
food for thought.
 — Known

Cool
 — psychofemale

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