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4 good soup
hank

5 liters good water half liter dirtytap water
 1
honesty
 2
buy dirty potatoes but scrub off others handling
 3
the dirt is good, the contamination bad
 4
minerals
 5
be sure to scrub the others off everything else
 6
wash off the gloss
 7
wash off the dna
 8
after the initial boiling
 9
don't boil again
 10

12 Sep 11


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WTF?  lol
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I hear helicopters
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yeah, now that you mention it...me too.
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