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The Camera Never Lies
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Hands plunged deep in far off pockets,
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gaberdine with matching socks.  
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Fingers muffed in gloom's dark corners,
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sand and fluff, keys to unlock
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Roughed up tainted sticky wrappers,
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badge from cap, Spearmint Gum.
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Sundry fun fair waltzer tickets,
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dried up currant from a bun.
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On bent old pennies sickly George,
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the King of England briefly reigned.
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Stuck to out of focus photo,
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toothless grins and Bovril stains.
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Shutter snaps through  sea side mist,
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behind the sand dunes kiss me quick
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Once upon a life i stood,
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knobbly kneed inside their frame.
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Mothers elbow at my shoulder,
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cold as ice but knew my name.
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Grandma's ear stuck to the airwaves,
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King George stuttered, Christmas day.
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Once more the shutter caught a moment
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while time moved swiftly on its way.
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10 Nov 11

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