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Early Morning Shop Q
larrylark

Rhino eyes,
 1
riddled with last night,
 2
cider stale breath.
 3
She’s a bed hopping
 4
gob stopping mess.
 5
No bag of  acid drops
 6
is sour as her.
 7
 
 
She spins  confections of lies.
 8
Sighs, close to tears,
 9
bitter as pear drops,
 10
demonstrably half cut.
 11
Gutter glued to a map of her ways,
 12
while we creep into another crap day.
 13
She pieces together the stormy weather
 14
that blows hurricanes through
 15
the tingling bliss of sherbet fizzes.
 16
 
 
“You gotta wife?
 17
A fag? Some change
 18
I can rearrange?”
 19
The orderly queue
 20
disappears from view.
 21
She looks me straight
 22
In the eye.
 23
 
 
“Wife?
 24
Life?
 25
Got one?
 26
Fiver?”
 27
 
 
She chews her thumb,
 28
I’m struck dumb.
 29
 
 
“Wanna lick,
 30
You old prick.”
 31
 
 
“Scrubber!”
 32
someone mumbles,
 33
while shifting foot to foot.
 34
 
 
“I’m a bigger better scrubber
 35
than you could ever fuckin' dream of.”
 36
she screams, and in that moment
 37
she is queen, as we survey the wreckage
 38
of our torn and tawdry lives.
 39
Striving to be what we'll never achieve,
 40
some barely breathing
 41

2 Dec 11

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Brilliant stuff Larry. You have painted a wonderful picture. I really must start getting to work earlier. cheers ;)
 — unknown

enjoyed reading.  I especially like lines 1-41.
 — JKWeb

awesomeness
 — unknown

i am faskinated by the Dickensian area i live in full of those adrift and awash...it reminds me of me....and its great having all day to do it not needing to work no more

Larry Copperfield lark  
 — larrylark

I think you read this poem word by word JK...well dun

Larry one liner Lark
 — larrylark

Indeed.

JK one word Web.
 — JKWeb

I never ever doubt your deeds JK

Larry Hi deedle ee Deed Lark
 — larrylark

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