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The Dutch
Haxxen

Once, I ran from the reich
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and coddled slavs and kikes
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but now i revel
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below sea level
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and finger leaky dykes
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13 Feb 12

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love it
 — faith

stupid.

once, i lunched with placid dutch,
we dined on beer and cheese...
they burped and belched
and talked too much:
they do just as the please!

but, in the room came minnie mouse,
an orchid in her hair;
and all the dutch felt as been punched,
that minnie the mouse was there.

for minnie looked so elegant,
so savoir faire and debonaire;
and all that lunch of drinking dutch,
sang songs to minnie fair.
 — cadmium

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rival pedi-salon owner insert text here:
 — cadmium

^ Apparently you're the only pedo here.... But I don't believe that....
 — Haxxen

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