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shepherds pie
hank

what do you call it
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when something just
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appears? mincerializes?
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tin foiled ufo
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manifests upon a chair
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(which is no chair at all)
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keyrings, holder of keys
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thrust it to heat
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and eat, all together melts
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the blueish bowl
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same as its shallower sister
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received a time ago she
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now holds oils
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for delyth.

16 Aug 12

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Nice poem,

I want to pretend this one is about me.

:-)
 — PollyReg

then do.
 — hank

Pure class...just like the dish itself

Larry steak and chips lark
 — larrylark

heh, still love-able.
 — PollyReg

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