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childsun
hank

have i spoken? i don't know
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words are akin to a forest
 2
better to hide than to be seen
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have i learned? i don't know
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words are bad instructors
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they tend to tend towards rote
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has it been fun? definitely yes
 7
let the smile cross your face
 8
brighten up the coming son
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27 Sep 12

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Cute!

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