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Stark Beauty
faith

She walks in like a lustrous diamond
 1
with her polished boots, refined smile
 2
and a scandalous jaunt
 3
about her personality
 4
 
 
Confidence delivers itself
 5
to her front door
 6
in large quantities
 7
of 90 per 12" package
 8
 
 
Accompanying her is Rachel
 9
on her strife for looks
 10
what a sext up kid
 11
the Lorax really is vulgar
 12
 
 
Nothing's fresh
 13
you're either fuckable or you're invisible
 14
and our generation
 15
needs more Tylenol
 16

26 Mar 13


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is that why you love her? oh, you kiddo, kidding
 — unknown

What? I'm confused.
 — faith

are you confused about it or does she confuse you?
 — unknown

She confuses me.
 — faith

i read that you are infatuated. alluring is not always beautiful but try your luck. what is confusing when you don't specify your intention..
 — unknown

^^ alluring used as verb
 — unknown

i am not sure line 14 rings true. everybody is fuckable to somebody.
 — raskolniikov

@Unknown, I don't have an intention.
 — faith

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