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the hunt

we are all just looking
for a meantime answer

5 Aug 13

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how do we respond to this?
 — unknown

searching poem
 — larrylark

it isn't much i know...it's very distilled.
but i like how...no matter how often i read it
i hear 'mealtime' not meantime
 — hank

and within that the little poem holds its own kind of power
something...edgy, scary, mysterious, unnerving
and now i dare not touch the little poem for fear of losing my hand
 — hank

Now THAT is true.  However... u must ask yourself--does TRUTH come in two short lines?  I disagree with Hank--this is too brief, I'd suggest that u elaborate.  ~Forbster
 — aforbing