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Me vs. Motley Crue
dannyprice

every song
 1
 
 
smoking
 2
drinking
 3
partying
 4
with
 5
girls
 6
girls
 7
girls
 8
 
 
my songs too
 9
but
 10
 
 
in
 11
minor keys
 12

9 Aug 13

Rated 9 (9.4) by 2 users.
Active (2): 8, 10
Inactive (9): 3, 7, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10

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Awesome.
 — 9

probably one of my all time favourite poems i have ever read.
 — raskolniikov

raskolniikov, while I think you're praise may be more than this poem deserves, I greatly appreciate it. Thank you.
 — dannyprice

So great.
 — unknown

I've only read this 4 times today.
 — 9

nice one
 — unknown

Thanks everyone.
 — dannyprice

^
you guys are weird
 — DeformedLion

Come on, feel the noise!  Not sure it is strong enough for Motley boys.  
 — Isabelle5

^Quiet Riot
 — unknown

Oh, splatt on me!  
 — Isabelle5

someone mention Pussy Riot?
 — unknown

great
 — unknown

quiet riot isn't metal,
but then neither is motley crue.
awesome poem though.
 — unknown

^
 — unknown

pricelessdanny
 — unknown

LOL!  My son's favorite song at age 3 was "Girls, Girls, Girls"...
 — aforbing

5
 — cadmium

who are you, Danny price...? areyouthesoulbehind commercial music, or a victim of not enough experience. I gave this a 5 cause it's a homes piece. every good clone would know which one of the two of you -- the crue entity or you -- had the minor key songs. I've never consciously known a m.c. song, though I cloned through the 50's and 60's. so, I don't know how to read this. but, maybe that's like my stuff for most here, and maybe I think that's kind of a good thing. so, I wrote myself into giving this a 10 afterall.

thanks for the lesson.
 — cadmium

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