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the problem with but and and
hank

I've been poor all my life
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but
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and
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my taste has always corresponded with the most expensive thing
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on the shelf
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or is it the reverse?
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10 Oct 13

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I've worked hard all my life
but
I'm poor
and
My taste has always been the simpler things in life, so it works.

Reversed as in is it your taste that is poor and your life that is rich?
 — unknown

^was wondering along similar lines
 — unknown

^^ was wondering what ^ they were wondering which is what you were wondering. i wonder too.
 — unknown

^ haha. i am wondering what it smells like inside hanks' head.
 — mandolyn

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