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going out
hank

she's fed up i ask if she would like us both
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to jump off a bridge
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she says yes and i ask which one
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the golden gate or some other
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i'm not sure about that way so i suggest
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let's go to the pantanal and get eaten by an anaconda
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seems to me the better play
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shots two heads two messy
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22 Oct 13

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I say grab a bottle of scotch. Cheers to you both!
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