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how to love unconditionally
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she has arthritis
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and i
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heart failure
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we have been together for fifty years
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is usually how i introduce ourselves
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and then I pause.
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(because of love i say to myself
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i mean the children
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the mortgage
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social security
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because all our exs are dead
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neither of us can drive
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because we know too much embarrassing shit
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about each other.)
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they walked hand in hand
as their thoughts
ran and ran

10 Nov 13

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