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otter or other
hank

these things we throw out
 1
who would've imagined
 2
could be so good?
 3
 
 
fish, beef, turtledoves?
 4
these things we throw out
 5
who would've imagined!
 6
 
 
can you imagine yourself
 7
tossing out a fox?...or what's it's name...
 8
one of those creatures that makes
 9
both the water and land its home?
 10
 
 
does the mirror that exists in your tv screen
 11
show you enough of you you beauty?
 12
 
 
it'll be terrible when frolic
 13
becomes illegal
 14

16 Dec 13

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is L12 on purpose with the double "yous?"
 — mandolyn

other is probably gollum

preciousssss
 — DeformedLion

yes on line twelve
 — hank

hello hank,

nice poem

:-)
 — PollyReg

C'est toujours
BonBon
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Betty¿
 — monsters_eye

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