| slinky
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hank
| i have a slinky. | 1 |
it goes down the stairs, | 2 |
but stops if you don't | 3 |
do it right. | 4 |
my slinky is metal, | 5 |
not plastic and makes | 6 |
a nice noise. | 7 |
there is a song that | 8 |
goes with it. | 9 |
sometimes i hang | 10 |
from my nose, | 11 |
and sing it. | 12 |
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24 May 04 |
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— SpunHeart
HAHAHAHA... i love it.. hahaha
— unknown
And sometimes i bet you wished you'd buried it in down the bottom of the garden .
— larrylark
?
— unknown
I liked ball - this is bull.
— unknown
no, bull is coming next.
— hank
The bull is always closely followed by shit
— unknown
thoroughly enjoyable. except this poem should rhyme.
— eajohnson1
I like it, and I don't know why! *snicker* It's not GOOD, but on the other hand, what IS good anyway? It made me laugh. And i like it. You're quirky, not like other people, which makes you unique! Stay this way. I like this poem, or have i mentioned it already? =]
— nickiblitz
im going to stay tuned to your channel.
10+11 are lazy. you can make something as openpalmed as 3+4.
— gnormal
Absolutely appalling.
— unknown
The slinky factory made heaps and heaps of money off me when I was a kid.
— wendz
everyone loves a slinky. go. slinky. go.
— thirdeyris
your, special.
— divinity
and you divine.
— hank
quick edit for gnorm.
— hank
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
oh man
oh man i can man really man identify wid dis maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
rafterman
— unknown
ah cheerful!
— nicolecote
I've often wondered what makes a slinky such a delicacy. Its goofiness? Its momentum? Its inevitable entanglement?
Very worthy protagonist.
h's unkn
— unknown
Love it.
This is special, you are special. I wish I was special.
— DeformedLion
Damn, you wrote this on my birthday.
— unknown
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