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up around bryn mawr
hank

all i want to know
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is that you enjoy'd our walk
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that when you took the left
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through the new gate
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and up the paved part
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next to the nice wall and that cottage
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where the last hanged man lived
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you thought about me
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because that's the stretch
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i think about you
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11 Mar 14

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i really like this hank. read it a few times now.
-mandolyn
 — unknown

oh HANKY I loove you
Tom and jerry & scoobyDOO
you,re my lolli
POP

betty BANG betty BANG
 — unknown

it's a little knot untied and left hanging in just the right way .. nice.
a good read.
 — jenn

Bryn Mawr in Wales or Pennsylvania?

Could be either, doesn't matter, 'that cottage' is both.
 — jenn

This is BANGIN'!!!!  I love the contrast, the colors, the matter of fact vibe yet the somber undertone of the whole thing.  It's melancholia stewed and perfected.  :-)
 — starr

oh dear this is good
 — unknown

Agrees to everybody
 — unknown

jenn - the bryn mawr i'm speaking of is the house of the founder of Bryn Mawr in Penn. Roland Ellis. Cheers. Ty.
 — hank

Ah, thanks Hank :)

I know Wales very very well, but alas the US only by remote viewing.
 — jenn

how do you know wales well?
 — hank

...and that's a good comment..'remote viewing'...unfortunately, i think, that that is how all the world knows us, or doesn't...we encouraged that no?
it can be a good place, you should go
 — hank

I like in England, Hank, which is right next door to Wales :)

I spent a lot of my early teen youth there, did a lot of hitch-hiking up and down the country, some mountain walking and cross-country hiking, and I have several friends both north and south Wales who I used to visit .... though I've not done for for a few years.

It's about as wild and mountainous a country as you can get in this part of the world, unless you go much further north into Scotland.

Wales just about has everything, mountains, beaches, low-land valleys, it's both very rural and has a couple of fairly big cities too.

It's a such a beautiful place :)
 — jenn

I like = I live


><
 — jenn

... and yeh, I really want to go to the US, but always hesitated as it's one of those places which would take a life-time to get to know properly, so I decided to head eastwards ... to Japan :)
 — jenn

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