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guy sinclair (without clarity) - ode to sir_I_clan
hank

guy, you are either dead
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or you found it, that long tether
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that allows you
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guy, you are either dead
 4
or standing still with bloated knees
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forever never to lie
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guy, likely dead, but I imagine
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that You're most likely sharing
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your Particular insolence with Laughter
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25 Mar 14

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love it
 — mandolyn

Curious piece with honesty woven into it. Like the last 3 lines in particular. The capitals lift it up into something else.
 — jenn

his mother said he was drinking brandy, she probably kicked him of her island too.
 — jenakajoffer

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