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notorious dilation
hank

saw an old friend today
 1
we live in the same small town
 2
i suppose people are busy-
 3
it is to this that i chalk up absence
 4
 
 
i was carrying my nights grocery
 5
contemplating where to gather wood
 6
a vehicle street conversation and this friend
 7
dumped a borrowed bunch at my door
 8
 
 
i sit in front of his fire now, my wide eyed fire
 9
remembering that i was thinking while chatting
 10
'damn, his pupils are arrow thin- can he see?  yet
 11
what light spears through slatey blue constricted eyes!'
 12

for RB.

2 Apr 14

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This is nice. Good title too. L11 is it.
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