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Smoke
kripto

Fire, abruptly starting
 1
Spontaneous combustion
 2
Water falling from the sky
 3
Raindrops slipping through, into our eyes
 4
 
 
Slipping through onto the fire
 5
The fire, dissipates
 6
Energy released, energy transferred, energy transformed
 7
Left is a gas, a stream of steam
 8
 
 
A cloud of smoke, rising to join
 9
To be with the others
 10
Nimbus, cumulus, cumulonimbus
 11
 
 
Horrendous, disgusting
 12
Such a dreary day
 13
Clouds have covered the sky
 14
Darkness, full coverage no sun
 15
Almost no sky
 16
 
 
All black, charcoal
 17
Has consumed all
 18
Coughs, and gasps
 19
All I hear
 20
As I attempt to cover my self
 21
But I fail as I too am consumed
 22

6 May 14


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