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you preserved in the blog
hank

please allow my small
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tiny attempt
 2
to immortalize you
 3
 
 
it used to be i suppose
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a tale or vision
 5
or an exquisite death
 6
 
 
they'd do it by fighting!
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they'd do it by singing
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or burying you in the bog
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29 May 14


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I got buried in a bog once but Peat rescued me

Larry from the pit Lark
 — larrylark

Nice title
 — unknown

larry to get buried only once is not enough
 — hank

...this is attacking.
 — hank

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