|found words- tobago
today i saw,
black people open your eyes
1 Jun 04
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What the hell is this supposed to mean?
Tobago; do you live in the united states of america or The United States of America? Or maybe in some other country, but still with a Capital.
whoops lost something in cut and paste. updated now.
to simple minded- united states of america looks fine to me.
to rixes, don't ask me, ask you.
Oh yea you "lost something in cut and paste." Sure.
mmmm Tobago, .This did nothing for my lumbago, in fact it made it worst
Yeah, this doesn't mean much. Maybe the comma needs to be taken out. But it's still too short and ambiguous to be very meaningful.
the ambiguity makes it intriguing. remember these are "found words" so any addition would ruin the significance behind the concept of a "found" poem.
i like it.
makes me want to play with the line breaks
until i realize you probably did already.
this is beautiful.
it's amazing how a poem, simple words, can transport you.
i, occasionally, exhibit signs of genius. this is one of them.
brilliant. i'm back and reading. man, you got some amazing stuff...
i ain't commentin on this one
if i do, it will be gone in a few m,oments
Tobogan Bargain Basement Man
i truley dont know HOW to comment on this... the only thing that i can pull from this is its amazing capacity to confuse me...........
Yeah..perhaps I'm just dense or just plain stupid, but this makes no sense to me.
-A confused Mary
epiphany in tobago - a tourist wakes up as Gregor Samsa.