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summer sausages
Mudd

the day smelled of sausages in a summer garden
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not a shadow above or below the enormous blue
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women sing smooth honeyed dreams
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wind running through their light dresses
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music shot through with soaring beauty
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time cools and drives the fluff away
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sordid life reveals us
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bitterly drunk
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6 Aug 14


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