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cigarettes and poems
hank

quit smoking poems
 1
fell into the back ground
 2
like that mako shark
 3
under attack at rest
 4
 
 
it would come upon the bait
 5
so flippin fast! (think it was a she)
 6
and after a bite, drift
 7
back into dark blue
 8
 
 
how poems have gone
 9
since quit smoking
 10
there is no pulsating go
 11
if not something to stop upon
 12

21 Oct 14

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English man.
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Why are substances so inspiring?  Nice poem
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