|Something is Rotten in the State of Denmark
from my window
I can see
a huge hill,
upon which is a girl('s house),
who I dated for almost
she had 3
(one was a spare)
and it used to amuse me
to hold her nose
when she sneezed-
so her eyes would pop out.
the novelty wore off when,
one winter's night,
my dog caught one and
nice girl though.
- a found poem
9 Jun 04
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Nice poem, however, the line breaks and obscure spacings, although interesting, seem random and without purpose.
you and your damn 'found poem's inuki, why dont you try writing something for yourself every now and then?
Excuse me, unknown..
"why dont you try writing something for yourself every now and then?" excuse me! i 30 poems on this site that I wrote myself. This is only my second found poem.
If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. Plain and simple.
This one is really cool.
I am curious about your choice of spacing, but I'm not against it. It was simply a little scattered for my taste. I felt I was all over to find out about what the dog did. Maybe you could reformat??
Very good considering it is a "found poem". Nice job.
haha, i like it.
i love the obscure and seemingly random line breaks and spacing.
where did you 'find' it?
The original source was:
go to question 8- you'll figure out where I got the title for this poem from, as well as the source of the poem.
f* me this is funny! hehe..i think the fact that this is a found poem makes it funnier...aww man too funny for words. *i stand in awe*
cool like it
This is brilliant,lucky you for finding it. It goes in my favourites
i can't crit this. where's the point?
Great found poem