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LIFE AS A FORM OF TRAVEL
hank

I.
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vane chet  ·
 2
upload cv to all job sites
 3
i look about and see people fitting in...everybody fits...what happened to me?
 4
all saints music
 5
and b 52's
 6
the blue lagoon has one star and the tequila sunrise is oranged over ice  both for 4 and there are vests, suspenders and ponytails
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trainman says 'have a good evening sir despite the weather'.
 8
its called comedy...but it's really just bellyaching
 9
horses sorely missed
 10
 
 
II.
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clean water onion garlic saffron
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thai soya knorr fish cube and quality
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anchovie in oil
 14
small button mushrooms quartered plum
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tomatoes frozen spinach one filet
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frozen pollack....cayenne pepper and gozo
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salt crystals....let it be
 18
wild mushroom broth and wild mushrooms
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pour over basmati when tuna steak that
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was added last cooked and falling apart
 21
2 litres water...2 hrs
 22
 
 
III.
 23
 
 
ball peen venus - penus
 24
democratictator
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democratic art is generally bad art dark matter being a super unfocused laser
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dream  - shepherd named cobalt  feb 2?..2015
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checkout muse
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22 Feb 15

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i is great!

ii foodie and sensusl

lost me in iii and I lost the poem

cheers
 — PollyReg

*sensual (phone poem)
 — PollyReg

lol, again. phone *typing*
 — PollyReg

where was it mentioned this was from a phone?
 — hank

It was from a phone?

The comment section is becoming increasingly cryptic. deliberately challenging.

Your poems a good read!
 — PollyReg

line 15 quartered.  I liked reading it but I can't make suggestions as I don't know what your aim was.  Made me want to go cook!

No phone in this.  
 — Isabelle5

thanks Isabelle
 — hank

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