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growup
hank

you're gonna laugh
 1
happily
 2
hopefully but you
 3
 
 
probably ain't gonna search
 4
your pocket for a penny or
 5
toss one
 6
 
 
toss anything and
 7
make me mad
 8
you keep those things to yourself
 9

23 Aug 15

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ok...yess...fuck yess...damn...what do i do now?
 — hank

'Toss one in' for line 6.

Punctuation will help this, a bit...

There's not enough void to avoid here
 — Known

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