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on the (h)eel
hank

i'll try and describe the difference
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fish have an on
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off switch
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eels do not
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it died magnificently
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that brown bird
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green
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if you looked
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20 Sep 15


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can you 'like' your own poems?
 — hank

This flies over me...way up there
 — Known

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