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you look about
hank

i said
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geez
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that fucking tee
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aint very
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i said
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man
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what a ? and asked myself
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is this the people?
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12 Nov 15

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I like your words and your tenacity.(399 more where that came from, yo!) I like your sculpcha too.
 — tonebone

something like, 'and talked myself' would tighten this and edge it into reality. the 'and asked myself' is from some simon and garfunkle song.

everything else seems ok to me, seems like what you'd brain-shoot to the world as you walked inside some neighborhood, some transitional street where there's yuppie bagel shops but not a starbucks yet.

knowing of course, that this is you looking in the mirror before you go to the lounge. or something.
 — cadmium

oh, sorry hank. this probably words perfect where you live. it's not chicago, but then it's not supposed to be i guess, cause of political necessity and supply.
 — cadmium

The replica handbag is designed in the image of the classic Stella McCartney Falabella Bag Collection, and not only is it super chic and trendy, but it will make your life easier!The Stella McCartney Falabella iPhone Case comes with an extra chain long strap that is ideal for those hand free occasions, when you want your phone within grasp reach. It’s perfect for running errands of those fake handbags. My only wish is that this case had one or two card slips built-in. For those days when you want to leave your bag at home and go super minimal, then to have your phone and a couple cards is ideal. Still a fantastic trendy tech accessory. One that I would love to have wrapped up under the Christmas Tree with my name on it. My favorite feature, is the creative chain detailing and long strap. The 22” chain strap is perfect to wear over the shoulder or wrapped around your wrist a couple times and worn like jewelry and replica handbags uk.
 — zhangkai1992

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