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Why tears burn
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Tears burn because they come from
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candles. My heart of wax
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inherited them.
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Somebody struck a match
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and in the shape of a flame,
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not so much falling as dripping,
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they wrote your name
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until I dissolved.
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23 Nov 15

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excellent imagery
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♥ this
except the title could be better (just my opinion)
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kid's poetry for kids that are starting to smell bad. edit this, find whatever is in it that's simple. don't over package your small experience and small talent. grow the talent from simple being and your experience will appear -- you've done everything already, you can walk away from react and kill... you just don't know how to feel anything yet beyond hurt, and it makes this sound like an adult pretending to be a child.
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