|a guy she told to suck eggs
he said 'don't be no obama'
we walked and all i remember
is this girl turning round
she says...(i don't remember)
she turns round yells...(don't know)
but she defends me, and that boy
scared way by her, and away
the idiot is now a bit behind
he say's 'don't bring no drama'
she i see defending me, man!
(i'm walking away during)
i can believe and smile, wow!
1 Dec 15
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not bad, sort of rappy. l11 is nice.
very nice, nice poetry writing. it's not rap, it's poetry and poetry is hard to write, and rap is just cloney.
so, why is this poetry? because it bends the phrases and makes the reader stay alert to the consciousness of the author -- look to watch where the piece is going, why it means something.
besides, anything that makes me want to write too is fine by me.
So you think rap is easy to write, Cadmium?
yes, it's very easy. it's hard to write good rap, but anything good is hard to write. i've done poetry slams. don't get cocky, kid.
no likey. no good.
My favorite part is the second stanza how you wrote in not remembering! Great! It really made this poem clever!