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Just Let It Be ~

I trusted you
you're such a liar
give you everthing that you need
give you everthing that i had
you've turned your back on me for the last time.
I've been broken
damaged from the inside
so tell me what's so wrong with me
why does everything seem so far away to me.
Time changed people changed
I'm sick of crying
sick of trying
let's leave no words unspoken
and let regrets fill everthing.
My everyday will always cloudy
but it wouldn't change who i was
just overhurts and let it be.

6 Feb 16

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Shockingly good despite the emo.
 — Known

13-14 was solid. Maybe re-write S1, 5 to 1 with tweaking.
 — sixtywatt