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Just Let It Be ~
unknown

I trusted you
 1
you're such a liar
 2
give you everthing that you need
 3
give you everthing that i had
 4
you've turned your back on me for the last time.
 5
 
 
I've been broken
 6
damaged from the inside
 7
so tell me what's so wrong with me
 8
why does everything seem so far away to me.
 9
 
 
Time changed people changed
 10
I'm sick of crying
 11
sick of trying
 12
let's leave no words unspoken
 13
and let regrets fill everthing.
 14
My everyday will always cloudy
 15
but it wouldn't change who i was
 16
just overhurts and let it be.
 17

6 Feb 16


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Comments:

Shockingly good despite the emo.
 — Known

13-14 was solid. Maybe re-write S1, 5 to 1 with tweaking.
 — sixtywatt

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