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weather here lovely
hank

a long slow spring
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a magritte sky
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did snow today
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26 Apr 16

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Magritte's skies are pretty nice but a well written poem can not live off a single borrowed image and three short lines. Maybe save this for the start of something with more thought put into it.
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Magritte's skies are pretty sweet as well as the well writtencomment I've so pleasantly writtencommented here off a single burrowed image and 3 short lines. Maybe save this for a rainy day when I know what the fuck I'm talking about. k thx.
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reveal yourself coward! (said no unknown to another unknown ever). but really well written comeback to previous anon post. You've semi affirmed the poet, made appropriately snarky response, and leveled up the troll train...choo choo. Good choice in abbreviations and word spacing. 8/10 to unknown #2
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I took a number dos on unknown's (my own) face. 10-4? copy. Raw sewage lozenge aisle 5. clean up immediATELY OH GOD IT'S EVERYONER.
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by far the best comment i've seen on the internet today. 11.5/10. my god, it's like you pooped a baby angel out of your keyboard with you fat dehydrated fingers. fucking Christmas miracle comment.
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Is that you God? It's me, Magritte.
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by the far the best comment of all time. ∞/10 omg. it's like i pooped as a baby and an angel popped out of your key board. christmast miracalico. comment

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What's up God, it's me mario.
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DEW  DEW  DEW  DEW DEW DO DEW, DEWDEWDEWDEW DEW DO DEW DEW....
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...and now back to our regularly scheduled capitalization...
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can't stop won't stop rock-a-fella -UNKNOWN
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It's a real Thomas Crown affair around here.
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