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metamorphosis
cadmium

root to spine,
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ponderous steam
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of dirt and pig.
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blood thin root
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drain Here, Now,
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Know, boy,
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from possibility.
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beautiful fruit:
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piss stream of acorn…
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fruit of mind,
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skin, of
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every round thing.
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he is beautiful,
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this tree,
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this endless oak
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of eternity.
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this is a picture of change and being changed. i think it's a poem.  

23 Jun 16

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I feel different.
 — cadmium

maybe not so bad. i still like this one.
 — cadmium

et expecto resurrecto.
 — cadmium

change is difficult, changing in a telephone booth must be exhausting. so many supermen, so many victims.
 — cadmium

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