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root to spine,
ponderous steam
of dirt and pig.
blood thin root
drain Here, Now,
Know, boy,
from possibility.
beautiful fruit:
piss stream of acorn…
fruit of mind,
skin, of
every round thing.
he is beautiful,
this tree,
this endless oak
of eternity.

this is a picture of change and being changed. i think it's a poem.  

23 Jun 16

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I feel different.
 — cadmium

maybe not so bad. i still like this one.
 — cadmium

et expecto resurrecto.
 — cadmium

change is difficult, changing in a telephone booth must be exhausting. so many supermen, so many victims.
 — cadmium