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hank

there's a circle about your head
 1
all around and all beyond
 2
friends, family, and physical rules
 3
laws, miracles and gravitational pulls
 4
halos tossed to non reluctant dogs
 5
so what, we chomp jump and run
 6
in the butterfly flitty park for'un
 7

11 Jul 16

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beautiful poem.
 — hank

good poem. i'd change l2 to "all round" for what it's worth.

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 — PollyReg

"all round and beyond"
 — PollyReg

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