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there's a circle about your head
all around and all beyond
friends, family, and physical rules
laws, miracles and gravitational pulls
halos tossed to non reluctant dogs
so what, we chomp jump and run
in the butterfly flitty park for'un

11 Jul 16

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beautiful poem.
 — hank

good poem. i'd change l2 to "all round" for what it's worth.

 — PollyReg

"all round and beyond"
 — PollyReg