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hank
| my swing swings high, | 1 |
but sometimes i just sit. | 2 |
it's not rope but chains, | 3 |
with a rubber u. | 4 |
i'm not always pushed- | 5 |
i like to do it myself. | 6 |
and if you swing both legs | 7 |
you'll swing straight , | 8 |
but if you swing one, | 9 |
you'll wobble. | 10 |
| 26 Jun 04 |
Rated 1 (8.3) by 1 users.
Active (1): Inactive (5): 1, 8, 8, 8, 9, 10 (define the words in this poem)
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umjmm — unknown
cute. — akiikii
...not cute — unknown
sha...wing! — unknown
doesn't really do or say anything original to me but how you swing on a swing and this most ppl already know. sry.
Maybe if you took the first 2 lines and tell us why you just sit on the swing instead of swinging. Or perhaps why you don't like to be pushed.
Just my humble opinion — Dinky
most people already know i swing on a swing? didn't know most people know that, sorry dinky. — hank
duh — themolly
Man, hank, I really like this--so simple, but there's a subtle metaphor here. — housepoppy
i like — kaleidazcope
Simple Truth — Roz
stupendous. says so much by saying so little. or is that the other way around? — ollylama
hm. twisting around on the chain swing. forgot about that little maneuver. — hank
i like this.
your poetry makes me smile sometimes. — listen
i think this is adorable. have an image of a little girl on a swing.. precious. — unknown
All true stuff. I like line 2 the best. Actually, sitting and twisting and tangling is a nice swing thing to do.
t'hank's unkn — unknown
nice hank. i never saw this.
rubber u. very nice. — gnormal
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