my swing swings high,
but sometimes i just sit.
it's not rope but chains,
with a rubber u.
i'm not always pushed-
i like to do it myself.
and if you swing both legs
you'll swing straight ,
but if you swing one,
26 Jun 04
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doesn't really do or say anything original to me but how you swing on a swing and this most ppl already know. sry.
Maybe if you took the first 2 lines and tell us why you just sit on the swing instead of swinging. Or perhaps why you don't like to be pushed.
Just my humble opinion
most people already know i swing on a swing? didn't know most people know that, sorry dinky.
Man, hank, I really like this--so simple, but there's a subtle metaphor here.
stupendous. says so much by saying so little. or is that the other way around?
hm. twisting around on the chain swing. forgot about that little maneuver.
i like this.
your poetry makes me smile sometimes.
i think this is adorable. have an image of a little girl on a swing.. precious.
All true stuff. I like line 2 the best. Actually, sitting and twisting and tangling is a nice swing thing to do.
nice hank. i never saw this.
rubber u. very nice.