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hank
| my swing swings high, | 1 |
but sometimes i just sit. | 2 |
it's not rope but chains, | 3 |
with a rubber u. | 4 |
i'm not always pushed- | 5 |
i like to do it myself. | 6 |
and if you swing both legs | 7 |
you'll swing straight , | 8 |
but if you swing one, | 9 |
you'll wobble. | 10 |
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26 Jun 04 |
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umjmm
— unknown
cute.
— akiikii
...not cute
— unknown
sha...wing!
— unknown
doesn't really do or say anything original to me but how you swing on a swing and this most ppl already know. sry.
Maybe if you took the first 2 lines and tell us why you just sit on the swing instead of swinging. Or perhaps why you don't like to be pushed.
Just my humble opinion
— Dinky
most people already know i swing on a swing? didn't know most people know that, sorry dinky.
— hank
duh
— themolly
Man, hank, I really like this--so simple, but there's a subtle metaphor here.
— housepoppy
i like
— kaleidazcope
Simple Truth
— Roz
stupendous. says so much by saying so little. or is that the other way around?
— ollylama
hm. twisting around on the chain swing. forgot about that little maneuver.
— hank
i like this.
your poetry makes me smile sometimes.
— listen
i think this is adorable. have an image of a little girl on a swing.. precious.
— unknown
All true stuff. I like line 2 the best. Actually, sitting and twisting and tangling is a nice swing thing to do.
t'hank's unkn
— unknown
nice hank. i never saw this.
rubber u. very nice.
— gnormal
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