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Aiming for Superiority
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Some form circles
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to ban "squares"
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from entrance,
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shaping egos.
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15 Sep 16

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This is not a love song!

Warmest,
John Lydon.
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You are correct, it is not a love song.

Are you the "Mr. Lydon"? If so, I am honored.
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but of course ;-)
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I meant John Lydon the lead singer of the Sex Pistols?
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also the lead singer of 'public image limited'. i thought that particular song, and that particular personage, not to mention the name of that partticular band was revelant to this particular social remark.

but i'm him if you want me to be, that's the beauty (and the ugliness) of anonymity.
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Regardless of who you are, I appreciate your commentary.  Thank you. :)
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Nice poem
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Thank you.
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is she into poetry now? lololol
welcome to the club
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lol
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Poignant!
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Thank  you for commenting, Unknowns
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