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how to be alone and successful
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my birth was my first mistake
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gender, my second
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beauty, my third
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darkness
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once a silent accomplice
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is now where i feel most secure
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less criminal
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for light is cruel
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reflective surfaces a constant foe.
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this morning the children fear me;
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i dare not tell them these disfigurements
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offered a degree of immunity
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that amongst flames
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i was finally left alone.
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yazidi victim set herself on fire to reduce abuse. true story.

19 Nov 16

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http://nytlive.nytimes.com/womenintheworld/2016/09/23/yazidi- girl-set-herself-on-fire-to-avoid-further-rape-at-hands-of-isis/
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Vvvv sad
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first line - rubbish, but consistantcy is a virtue - I, me, my= wow
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imagine setting yourself on fire so people wouldn't be interested in you.... logic fail or what
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