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what's within control
hank

motivation... but what you must understand
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is that once you get involved in something
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by nature you become artistic at it
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this is a gift of being a human being; that we can't
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help ourselves but to become good at things
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that's our nature...what we do
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now-
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to lose those thing's we're good at...
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20 Nov 16

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preachy little fuckers i know...sorry about that.
 — hank

More like Prologue to a poem, than a portrait of an artist.
The tone of how it starts, and ends are perfect. But in the middle, some tuning may help set the mood, , ,
 — crepaway

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