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what's within control

motivation... but what you must understand
is that once you get involved in something
by nature you become artistic at it
this is a gift of being a human being; that we can't
help ourselves but to become good at things
that's our nature...what we do
to lose those thing's we're good at...

20 Nov 16

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preachy little fuckers i know...sorry about that.
 — hank

More like Prologue to a poem, than a portrait of an artist.
The tone of how it starts, and ends are perfect. But in the middle, some tuning may help set the mood, , ,
 — crepaway