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Cro Magnon

I want to see more freckles
proud ginger hair
Okay a protruding chin
face short and wide,
but girl you've got something
an early lineage
with beads and cave paintings
ancestral worship
and a bigger brain.
The possibilities
are boundless.
Your model reflecting through glass
a thought in a museum
a muses shawl of time

18 Dec 16

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Very nice...
 — aforbing

whoever wrote this must have inherited a lot of cranial meat. kudos!
 — unknown

that was me ^
 — chloris

I prefer  Neatherdal ancestor worship
 — unknown