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anger ugly, mad ok

like you i am angry
like you i do mad ok
do not use your anger spitefully
which seems to me a sober trait
but after all that
the smoking rooms
the mushroom snowdrifts ploughed by labs
the cliff edges that came nearer than close
the water that swallows you this day

11 Jan 17

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OH, jonny, here comes the van.
 — unknown


Anger is an emotion a lot of people (women, more than men I think) have problems dealing with. Good poem...despite the psychological theme)

Last line is good. Well done.
 — PollyReg