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anger ugly, mad ok
hank

like you i am angry
 1
like you i do mad ok
 2
do not use your anger spitefully
 3
which seems to me a sober trait
 4
but after all that
 5
the smoking rooms
 6
the mushroom snowdrifts ploughed by labs
 7
the cliff edges that came nearer than close
 8
the water that swallows you this day
 9

11 Jan 17

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OH, jonny, here comes the van.
 — unknown

Lovely.

Anger is an emotion a lot of people (women, more than men I think) have problems dealing with. Good poem...despite the psychological theme)

Last line is good. Well done.
 — PollyReg

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