this is like the kind of writing charles olson did back in the 50's and 60's -- in parallel with ezra pound, trying to put a musicality to the actual experiences of life. olson used this way to build epic poems on the life of some common man, himself, pulling through life and trying to get life right. the poem was supposed to reflect vigor and honesty and vulnerability. — cadmium
cool, thanks cadmium..lots to look up.
i'm not channelling...just typing — hank