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Does he have to stand taller
just because he can't ?
Sebastian is languishing
but is not heard.
His voice is a ghost.
The etiquette lost,
as ill suited as an under arm bowler.

15 Feb 17

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Wonderful, funny little poem, indeed.

Typo on L7? I wonder?

Pop a question mark on the end of L2? Do you Aunty Poll Poll a fave.


Cheers for the read,
 — PollyReg

L5 the period to comma? Minor nits only.
 — PollyReg

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