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yesterday when i ran about
unknown

do i mean beer froth
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or the kick of vodka
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to your closest breath
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when i should be looking away
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where do i hide
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because the least of me is not trying
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embed betrayals in my eyes to be found
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attraction invites
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fatal for flowers and chocolates
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so i let it wine
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almost a wedding when i think funeral
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don't you feed madness
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8 Aug 17

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yes, when the words seem to be the thoughts and the only way to read the poem is to think it while you read it. which is like saying that you write it while you read, and that's the highest form of poetry. someone around it is lyrical, but the music has to come from inside me before i can read someone else's music. good read.
 — cadmium

I love, but I miss your thoughts.
 — percocet

yes!
 — percocet

u can be dumb if u want to.
 — percocet

u can be smart if u want to.
 — percocet

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