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I can't be in your shoes
neverthehero

Just looking to lift my aunts spirits up... going through radiation therapy.  Can anyone help me fix this up a bit?

I can't be in your shoes
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Nor the one to choose
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For you, or anyone
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For that matter...
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That said,
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I can decide
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On something
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Greater than myself
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And hopefully,
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Greater than all of us
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Which is...
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That you thrive
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7 Sep 17


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Will something, like, food or drink will lift your aunt's spirits?

Also, can you be there with your aunt? That is also a good way to, at least, maintain your aunt's spirit.
 — Qayyum

Or if you just want to fix the poem:

I can't be in your shoes,
for my feet cannot fit in yours,
but I am here to try to help
if your shoes somehow rebel.
 — Qayyum

Yeah, that helps.
 — neverthehero

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