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primal chaos
chloris

my mind will bleed profusely
 1
withrawal musings
 2
i can't empty
 3
a neighborhood of you here and there
 4
nitpicking overgrown flora
 5
crown i've revered
 6
all that glitters to your skin
 7
white crystals in hematite blend you well
 8
i'm drawn while you're too drunk
 9
naive to specter
 10
lost
 11

7 Oct 17

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you've got 'withrawal' in 2, which is like, 'with-overall' and works, or it's a drop-out 'd', which is maybe a mistake...?

"profusely", but this is the first color image, so 'blood' is more a quantity.

my mind
will bleed out

empty, like i can't empty
you from here
your nitpicking flora
choking my reveries:
glitter on your skin
white crystals in hematite
i've drawn and you're too drunk
naive to specter
lost
 — cadmium

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