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he paced and wound along
 1
the bar traced the track
 2
unwinding closer
 3
 
 
calmly clicked his heels
 4
to seconds tapped the bottle's butt
 5
on counter
 6
 
 
why yes, i will have more
 7
 
 
steeling stern i pled
 8
for nothing braced for hands
 9
unsheathing close
 10
 
 
unthreading thoughts of unlaced
 11
slips of fingers placed
 12
with legs astride and
 13
strung to feel around
 14
my back of lines laid low
 15
beneath
 16
the ground
 17
of needle pricking cloth
 18
 
 
a racing heart a
 19
knotted stomach wove
 20
me toward the door.
 21

9 Oct 17


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