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So me to be you
unknown

putting your shoes in mine
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footprints just do it
 2
hard to pace
 3
we drop confidence
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choose to walk inward
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run the stairs
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you become i
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prove wrong
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what it's like to be ourselves
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.
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2 Nov 17

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nice concept.
 — cadmium

I love the way you turn inside out with your words, the concept of "walking in another's shoes." A new take on an old phrase. :)
 — lyrycsyntyme

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