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brunel's lock into bristol
hank

that bridge, actually not a bridge
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but is, it's a lock
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steel doors with wood on top
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you walk across
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careful! might be slippery
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don't think i've ever encountered them open
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it's a small lock, only one story up
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from the avon
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14 Nov 17

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brunel was a great man.
 — cadmium

Gotta be small for a narrow barge to chug through. What I think is interesting is five stories below on the one side, sixup on the other. G'day G'lad ya'didnt slip, there is already enough underpants floating in the Avon as it is.

Betty
 — unknown

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