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brunel's lock into bristol

that bridge, actually not a bridge
but is, it's a lock
steel doors with wood on top
you walk across
careful! might be slippery
don't think i've ever encountered them open
it's a small lock, only one story up
from the avon

14 Nov 17

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brunel was a great man.
 — cadmium

Gotta be small for a narrow barge to chug through. What I think is interesting is five stories below on the one side, sixup on the other. G'day G'lad ya'didnt slip, there is already enough underpants floating in the Avon as it is.

 — unknown